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Post by Greelinator on Oct 29, 2009 17:46:09 GMT -8
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Post by Paradelous on Nov 4, 2009 21:51:05 GMT -8
I think I've received an edit version of this. My comment will stay here though, Take your time on the songs, choose your notes carefully and rehear them repeatedly.
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Post by Greelinator on Nov 4, 2009 22:04:27 GMT -8
ok thanks for advice. i'll be posting more. i don't care how harsh you have to be, just be honest about my work. after all, honesty is the best policy
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Post by Orkanis on Nov 5, 2009 10:01:09 GMT -8
Wooaaahzz, my advice would be same as Paradelous. It almost sounded like you just threw a whole bunch of random stuff in there. o.o sorry bout that ><
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Post by Greelinator on Nov 5, 2009 11:06:36 GMT -8
Wooaaahzz, my advice would be same as Paradelous. It almost sounded like you just threw a whole bunch of random stuff in there. o.o sorry bout that >< don't be sorry. i want honest opinions. without honest opinions, how would i be able to improve? i'm working on a mini boss battle midi atm. |
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Post by Orkanis on Nov 5, 2009 11:08:51 GMT -8
OH that's good, you should bombard the next post with a compressed winrar file of all of your midi work and we'll critique them on a list.  |
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Post by Greelinator on Nov 5, 2009 11:33:42 GMT -8
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Post by Ex Seed on Nov 7, 2009 17:47:40 GMT -8
Let's take a look here. I'm no musician, so this is the best I can offer you of an advice. Listen to your own music and question your music and see if it makes sense to you or if it's something that you would like to hear frequently. No offense, but, sounded like you threw a whole bunch of random notes to make it sound complicated. I'd think that wouldn't be a good idea. I suggest listen to some random game soundtracks and closely listen to the pattern they do. Then I'm pretty sure you'll get the hang of it.  |
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Post by Greelinator on Nov 7, 2009 18:04:43 GMT -8
Let's take a look here. I'm no musician, so this is the best I can offer you of an advice. Listen to your own music and question your music and see if it makes sense to you or if it's something that you would like to hear frequently. No offense, but, sounded like you threw a whole bunch of random notes to make it sound complicated. I'd think that wouldn't be a good idea. I suggest listen to some random game soundtracks and closely listen to the pattern they do. Then I'm pretty sure you'll get the hang of it. no offense taken. remember, i need completely honest response if i'm to get better. EDIT: here is a couple new midis i made= www.mediafire.com/download.php?zmzn44wez2wwww.mediafire.com/download.php?riuth3yziky |
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Post by Orkanis on Nov 14, 2009 17:18:45 GMT -8
There's something about that song, I think it's like Stroyer said, there's some detuned notes in there. Also, it seemed that you three in some more random notes. But, sounds more constructive this time.
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Post by Greelinator on Nov 15, 2009 11:21:17 GMT -8
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Post by Orkanis on Nov 15, 2009 12:33:59 GMT -8
Well it's getting better! I'd say, keep the notes but change them up a bit!  something more of a minor and or major tone to it. Chords i mean. |
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Post by Greelinator on Nov 15, 2009 12:38:41 GMT -8
the problem is i don't how to make chords with this program and thanks
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Post by Greelinator on Nov 16, 2009 9:59:09 GMT -8
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Post by Orkanis on Nov 16, 2009 10:27:34 GMT -8
It's either you've gone hyper making this song, or you're obsessed with solos, or you were trying to make it sound as complicated as possible lol.
One thing is for sure though. Slooooooww dooooown x3
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Post by Greelinator on Nov 16, 2009 12:05:10 GMT -8
It's either you've gone hyper making this song, or you're obsessed with solos, or you were trying to make it sound as complicated as possible lol. One thing is for sure though. Slooooooww dooooown x3 hahahaha if i decide to make it the title screen, it's gotta be related to Megadeth's music in some way. i figured since they use a lot of solos, then the title should have at least 3 solos in it. if it's for a boss battle, it has to be somewhat fast paced. |
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Post by Greelinator on Nov 17, 2009 16:24:55 GMT -8
*bump* this song is for one of my temples. not sure which one it will be though. www.mediafire.com/?ijnygtzt3onalso i can play some of this song on my real guitar |
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Post by Paradelous on Nov 18, 2009 14:06:42 GMT -8
Wow, this I have to say that I did not hear any detuned notes in this. Good job, keep up the good work.
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Post by Greelinator on Nov 18, 2009 14:09:26 GMT -8
Wow, this I have to say that I did not hear any detuned notes in this. Good job, keep up the good work. thanks and will do |
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Post by Orkanis on Nov 18, 2009 19:01:53 GMT -8
Nice, I'd say this sounds like a corrupt church or something. Add some bells!
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