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Post by Orkanis on Feb 19, 2009 0:50:12 GMT -8
Hey there peeps! I'm lookin for some help that would fix the problem with my anime I'm workin on right now The story begins with the people on earth just chilling then out of nowhere there was an alien invasion! The aliens started to blast the earth with huge beams here and there. Only a couple thousands of people escaped on space shuttles before the earth had imploded. Some of the shuttles were blasted from the sky and killed a lot of people. The main character is this girl who managed to escape on one of the surviving shuttles. She was separated from her family and the people she knew. So now she was alone in a shuttle with a hundred people she didn't know. She felt isolated and emotionless! Suddenly there was another attack from a nearby U.F.OOO and destroyed half of the ship. She ran for her life and spotted a boy waving at her from an emergency escape pod. She ran inside and pkkschhoooo! They blasted away along with other emergency escape pods! Some didn't make it in time. The boy in the escape pod was wearing an astronaut suit, he threw her a suit and told her to put it on. I'll skip the conversation! Anyways after so long the pod finally got sucked into a nearby planet's gravity and then crashed. They got out with the suits and looked around the lifeless planet. In the sky tiny sparkles were seen and shot straight down on the planet. They believed it to be the remaining survivors! uhhh from here on I don't know what to do anymore haaalp!
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Post by HeroBreed on Feb 19, 2009 19:08:06 GMT -8
Aleee dont worry I got you... though I need help as well
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Post by Orkanis on Feb 19, 2009 19:17:34 GMT -8
gaaah! What kind of advice is this!
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Post by HeroBreed on Feb 19, 2009 20:30:03 GMT -8
Kidding kidding
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Post by Paradelous on Feb 19, 2009 21:38:05 GMT -8
First of all you'll need a little background story on the characters before proceeding. Though going forward is possible without the story however, it'd help you on other struggles you will encounter. Just think yourself in their shoes and imagine what would you do or what would most likely happen or in this case since this series looks like the realistic type, what do you expect to happen with few females and or few males? Survival is crucial to keep the human race going before extinction. That can be an example, this story is more suited for the survival type. Creatures should excite the story up a bit or rather monsters.
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Post by HeroBreed on Feb 20, 2009 17:17:55 GMT -8
Wow Sir J it sounds like you know your stuff. You make stories as well as games... DEDICATION!!!
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Post by Paradelous on Feb 20, 2009 17:26:40 GMT -8
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Post by zeliouszack on Feb 21, 2009 0:46:24 GMT -8
I like it. It was well done. But if you are gonna turn it into a manga you should have some people working on it with you and maybe even some artist to do the drawings so you can be a little bit more descriptive with what the characters are doing. But overall it is really well done :]
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Post by korin on Feb 21, 2009 12:08:28 GMT -8
well done with the story line by the way if you relly wont to make a movie/anime you shold use flash mx or somthing like that and find voices for each character then it would be perfect!! good job and good luck.
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Post by Orkanis on Feb 21, 2009 14:18:41 GMT -8
I love you guys!! Korin! Paradelous! and mean guy! Thanks you allz! <3
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Post by HeroBreed on Feb 21, 2009 15:03:13 GMT -8
Hey that is cool that you guys like Alee's ideas!! Im already on the position for the drawings. Thank you all for supporting my best friend!! DEDICATION IS KEY!!!!
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Post by Orkanis on Feb 21, 2009 15:46:22 GMT -8
Any idea on what I should do next? If you say quit then I'll tell you to quit at life!! : D .
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Post by HeroBreed on Feb 21, 2009 15:47:35 GMT -8
Do need Billy May's assistance! LOL
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Post by Orkanis on Feb 21, 2009 16:04:34 GMT -8
No thanks! I can end my own life without his help! Which I'm not gonna do o.o'
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Post by HeroBreed on Feb 21, 2009 20:03:42 GMT -8
Heheh...
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Post by Orkanis on Feb 21, 2009 20:44:00 GMT -8
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Post by HeroBreed on Feb 21, 2009 21:21:31 GMT -8
ACTION NOWW!
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Post by Orkanis on Feb 21, 2009 23:21:14 GMT -8
Dang we reaaaallly gootta stop just posting random things! lol
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Post by HeroBreed on Feb 22, 2009 15:55:54 GMT -8
I think you are right Alee but it is just too fun
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Post by korin on Feb 22, 2009 16:19:02 GMT -8
but random things keep threads going. althouhg they things can be annoying at times.
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